Tarlan's David Hewlett Fan Fiction ::

Reviewer: Manic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2008 06:38 am Title: Hot Lips and ZPMs

ROFLMAO!! Daniel was hilarious, and Jack asking McKay to describe the ZPM again was brilliant!

Author's Response: LOL! I could just picture it from Jack :-)

Reviewer: Dreamer22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2007 08:26 am Title: Hot Lips and ZPMs

::snickers:: fantastic

Author's Response: Can you tell I had fun writing this ::evil grin:: I do plan to add to this little series :-)

Reviewer: Cath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2007 12:30 am Title: Hot Lips and ZPMs

This is a very nice snippet. An oblivious Rodney is wonderful. And I love how underhanded Jack was about keeping Rodney talking so he can appreciate the 'amazingly mobile mouth' some more *grin*.

This pairing is not my usual fare, but this story works for me because it's more a boys-being-boys moment rather than a life-time-commitment saga. I can even imagine how Daniel helps Jack out of his erotic haze later that evening. And that Daniel is okay with Jack's rare wandering eyes because he knows Jack's just having a "guys are always thinking about sex" moment, and that Jack's erotic thoughts are strictly lead by his smaller head and not his heart. And I'm refraining from going off on how John is seething with jealousy across the room as he watches Jack fantasize about his cuddly bed toy.

Regardless of my addendums (purely for personal amusements), I love your stories. You have some of the best plots and voices that I've read in a long time. Thank you for sharing and please keep writing.

Author's Response: LOL! I love your comments :-) I do like to write Jack/Rodney but I adore Jack/Daniel too and, as you said, sometimes, boys will be boys :-)